Jul 7, 2009

佳作 1 - 英语作文

Mr. Beach Crab and the Seagull

by Jonathan David Chan

One morning, Mr. Beach Crab was crawling on the sand when he stumbled on his enemy, which was Mr. Big Black Bear. Mr. Big Black Bear thought that Mr. Beach Crab will soon be his lunch. But when he saw its hard shell, he said “ I will break your shell with a hard rock and soon gobble you up, ha-ha!” He then turned Mr. Beach Crab over. It can’t move anymore. After that, he left for a while to search some big rocks nearby.

Mr. Beach Crab was very scared. He shouted “Help ! Help!” Soon, a seagull flew by. He heard its screaming. He stopped and helped to turned Mr. Beach Crab over again. Mr. Beach Crab said “Thank You”. “You’re welcome.” The seagull said.

Then they saw Mr. Big Black Bear in the distance. He was carrying a big rock. Mr Beach Crab scurried away while the seagull flew away quickly. Mr. Big Black Bear was very angry when he saw that Mr. Beach Crab was not on the beach anymore.

Soon, the seagull landed on a rocky place. The rocks were slippery and its foot slipped and trapped itself into some rocks. Seagull tried to pull its foot out the rocks, but the foot was stuck tightly. In a short while, the tide was rising. The seagull was afraid that he will drown. He shouted “Help! Help!”.

Luckily, Mr. Beach Crab came by. He pushed the rocks away . The seagull was free ! He said “Thank You”. “You’re welcome.” Mr. Beach Crab said.


Wtitten by: Jonathan David Chan, 9 years old, 3 Murni.

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